Manuscript diagnosis for fiction writers

You Know Something Isn't Working. But What?

Take the Manuscript Health Check and discover what's working, what's getting in the way and what to tackle next.

You've written the book. You've edited it. You may even have rewritten parts of it more times than you care to admit, but there's still that nagging feeling that something isn't quite landing.

Is it the structure? A middle that drags? Characters who aren't developing as you'd hoped? A point-of-view problem? Or have you simply spent so long inside your manuscript that you're too close to see what's actually on the page?

Take the Manuscript Health Check to stop guessing and start identifying where your manuscript needs attention.

In just a few minutes, you'll discover:

What kind of shape your manuscript is really in, without the jargon or judgement.

What's already working, so you don't accidentally edit the life out of it.

Where your biggest sticking point lies, from structure and pacing to character, POV and reader experience.

Free personalised result. Takes 2 minutes.

A large printed manuscript and a coffee mug on a bright desk beside a window
Who this is for

For writers who love their story but aren't sure what's working anymore.

If you've poured yourself into your manuscript but reached the point where you can no longer tell what's working and what isn't, this is for you.

No jargon. Just a clearer understanding of what's happening in your story and what to tackle next.

  • Novelists mid-draft

    You have a real draft going but the shape feels unclear.

  • Finishers who feel stuck

    You are close to done, yet something keeps holding it back.

  • Character-led writers

    Great voice and people, but momentum keeps stalling.

  • First-time authors

    You want honest, encouraging direction before you go further.

How it works

Clarity in three simple steps

  1. 1

    Answer 11 questions

    Quick, honest prompts about where your draft feels stuck.

  2. 2

    Get your draft type

    See which of four draft profiles matches your manuscript right now.

  3. 3

    Follow your next step

    Receive a focused, encouraging path to shape and finish your book.

What you'll receive

A clear picture of your draft, not a vague verdict

Your result names your draft type and shows what is working, what is holding it back, and where to focus next. It is warm, specific, and built to help you keep going.

Your draft type

Strong Concept, Loose Structure

Holding it back: the structure wanders, so momentum dips.

Do next: map your key turning points before your next revision.

It showed me exactly why my manuscript felt flat, and what to fix first. I finally had a plan instead of a vague worry.
PHPD HarrisonDevelopmental editing client
Donna pinpointed where my pacing sagged. My revision finally had direction and I stopped second-guessing every chapter.
PTPaul TaylorDevelopmental editing client
It named what I could feel but never fix, then gave me clear next steps. I went back to the page knowing exactly where to start.
NWN WrightDevelopmental editing client

Stop guessing. See what your draft needs next.

Eleven questions to help you identify what's holding your manuscript back and discover where to focus your attention next.

Free personalised results, with practical next steps to help you move your manuscript forward.

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